Posted 27 September 2009 - 09:47 AM
What's the significance of the swirls being where they are? They're completely pointless. I think you'd have been better off putting swirly bits at the points of greatest air resistance to try and give the effect of the car moving sleekly along.
At the moment you've got a big car reflected on the floor and some swirly things which look like they're some Indian smoke signals about three miles behind it.
Oh also your sparkly floor reflections of the sparkly things don't work. The sparkly bits they're reflecting would need to be underneath the car. If they're not reflections then there's no reason why they've suddenly changed to a downwards focus rather than upwards.
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