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sonic718
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cnc
and I mean cnc

Recently I've been having some meaningless comments on my work, I'm not saying everyone does this. Just some people leave meaningless comments on my work.

so that means if you don't like it don't just come in here and say you don't like it. Give me a reason, tell me how to improve (ex: I don't like it, the blending isn't good, try to work on blending)
also means if you like it, don't just say you like it. Give me a reason and tell me how to improve (ex: I like it, the effects are nice, but the blending needs work)

I personally think the blending needs work on this one tongue.gif
Barak
First of all it looks like a WIP... this is clearly not finished...

what are you trying convey in that? the skull or the urban setting? give a focal to one of these.
sonic718
blurred the skull and sharpened the urban setting a bit,

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does it look any better?

btw, what exactly about it looks unfinished?
Barak
mostly coloring looks like it's halfway done...
I know a c4d that would work awesome here H.gif
kreotis
QUOTE(Fishermanim @ Jun 24 2009, 02:32 PM) *

I know a c4d that would work awesome here H.gif

I must agree
Xemaul
That skull need's to go. It does absolutely nothing to add to the piece, and it distracts from the focal, no matter how much blurring you do. I like the left side though. Try to replicate that on the right.
h3n7y
QUOTE(Xemaul @ Jun 26 2009, 12:56 AM) *

That skull need's to go. It does absolutely nothing to add to the piece, and it distracts from the focal, no matter how much blurring you do. I like the left side though. Try to replicate that on the right.


Have to agree, the skull looks really awkward in there with all the sparkly bits on the opposite side.
Dinty
blurring made the skull look way worse
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