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Too bland for me.

There just appears to be a stock with 3 things around it and a c4d down the middle. Just kind of boring with all the empty space.

It's more than that, but I get what you're saying. I just don't like going too far with effects.

I like what you've done with this one. Was the far left a part of the stock you used?

Depends which stock you're talking about. I used 6 different stocks.

http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll313/N...ent=23ivzpz.jpg

http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll313/N...paper_12178.jpg

http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll313/N...ose_budding.jpg

http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll313/N...ent=148iqt3.jpg

http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll313/N...ckgrounds_2.jpg

http://www.atlasoftheuniverse.com/orion.jpg

Ooo, I see what you did thar - with the space stock. I can't really spot some of the others, but yeah - I think it looks too empty.

made a new version

Looks much better, but maybe some sort of border would look good as well.

I like the new version alot, although, i've seen that c4d alot, so it gets kinda boring for me

v3 is much better... but coloring needs work.