sonic718
Jul 25 2009, 11:13 PM
doodler tag, thought I'd called it that since that freehand stock on the left of the focal was hand drawn by me

v1

v2
spent about an hour more coloring it, which was hard givin that most of the stocks I used were b&w including the main stock. Also added some more effects

edit:
wow, 3 favs in deviantart in under a minute, musta done something right

edit 2:
v3

sharper colored version
Cmafai
Jul 25 2009, 11:18 PM
Friggen sexy. Really really like it. I like the color in the second version, but I love the sharpness and contrast of the first... overall I'd go with #1.
Think this is my favorite tag by you, and normally I hate this style. Especially when the focal is only a mediocre chick
Otter
Jul 25 2009, 11:58 PM
I don't like how the stock is blurry in V2. Looks better in V1.
Very very nice tag though
count sadath
Jul 26 2009, 06:44 AM
Wow.
Barak
Jul 26 2009, 07:29 AM
lose text. b&w version is great. good job.
Sycoarkantos
Jul 26 2009, 07:48 AM
I love the B&W Version, colour version is pretty hot too!
Cool doodling. :]
kreotis
Jul 26 2009, 08:28 AM
I like the colors in the second
sonic718
Jul 26 2009, 08:57 AM
made a sharper colored version
bling_masta8
Jul 26 2009, 10:19 AM
Definitely your best piece. Nice one sonic.
Saebjorn
Jul 26 2009, 11:36 AM
V3 is best in my opinon.
Nice piece.
Top left partway heading to the right is this C4D touching the piece you hand drew which just...stops. Like it got rubbed with the marquee tool or the block eraser.
Otter
Jul 26 2009, 04:53 PM
QUOTE(sonic718 @ Jul 26 2009, 04:57 AM)

made a sharper colored version
Yessssss
Matthew
Jul 26 2009, 08:36 PM
Excellent work here
Saebjorn
Jul 27 2009, 08:22 AM
For V3, the text is TOO sharp. I think you should blur it slightly.
And whats with the hand on her right? XD
Otter
Jul 27 2009, 01:04 PM
QUOTE(Saebjorn @ Jul 27 2009, 04:22 AM)

And whats with the hand on her right? XD
That is obviously a male hand.
kreotis
Jul 27 2009, 04:14 PM
Looks like there is a focal point now.
Xemaul
Jul 27 2009, 05:28 PM
#1 is definitely the best.
The colors in the others just don't work at all. And the little C4D's don't help much.
Overall it's a little busy and random.
And why do you upload tags to DeviantART?
sonic718
Jul 27 2009, 05:50 PM
I only upload the ones I really like, this is the second tag I've ever uploaded to DA
Battle Rifle
Jul 27 2009, 07:54 PM
take that text and c4d out of v3 and blur that background stock
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