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Anyway sonic, third thing in a row of yours that i've liked, this is a disturbing pattern
I know this is sort of a cop out, but I can't really explain why I like it, aside from the fact that geometric shapes make me go all giddy.

lolwat, why is it disturbing that you like my work

Black and white made me unable to follow what is in the sig. I just cant tell at all.

The whole left side is distracting, otherwise I like it.

That was a back stock choice for starters. the blacks are way to strong so you're limited to Phoronidaed up contrast from the get-go. Plus it's small and a bit LQ.

The graffiti effects are blurred and the whole thing is just a tag boring. :\

Your focal point is 2 points simultaneously. That is not how you do this. It leads people to become cross-eyed while viewing said work.

Yeah Mark is right, I don't know where to look in this piece. However, if I focus my eyes to the right... I do rather like it.