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Barak
still workin'

latest pieces, older to newer:


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I like v2 and 4 the most personally


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goes with the retroactively created LP:
http://fishermanim.deviantart.com/art/Dres...-Kill-133439065

EDIT:goes also with the retroactively created signature off the retroactively created LP:
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full sized LP:
http://fishermanim.deviantart.com/art/UrbanTime-133684644
Trees
"Urbantime"is obviously the best out of all of it. Your first signature is pretty good, I like v1 and v4. v2 the render just doesn't match. At all. It looks way out of place. The style as well as the color. The suit signature looks unfinished, but still looks nice in a plain sort of way. Your other signature looks off, mainly because of the render. The animu render doesn't seem to fit.

Meh, I haven't done this shit in a while. I'm rusty on giving criticism.
Barak
Well you can't compare an LP to a signature, but it is one of my better pieces.

glad you like the ones you like though smile.gif as to the anime renders, im having a phase. It'll prolly clear out soon.
Trees
I don't really have anything against animu, but it has ALWAYS irked me when I see them with C4Ds. Just the 2D and 3D clash doesn't please my eyes.

Anyway, still some good shit.
Annoyingfish
One and four are my favourite smile.gif I don't really like the pink/purple ones though, partly because the sparkles draw too much attention. The vexel is nice too biggrin.gif
h3n7y
2 & 4 on the sigs look best to me.

Dressed To Kill is ok, but looks a bit bland.

The next set of sigs is alright, not too keen, but nothing really dislikeable.

Really dont like urbantime sad.gif Seen so many pieces like it, and to me the execution isnt very good: textures arent crisp enough, the LiveTrace/Cutout doesnt look particularly good on the buildings and I really dislike the lens flares.

Sorry if that seemed a bit harsh, but I honestly cant think of anything positive on that piece.

2 & 4 on the sigs look best to me.

Dressed To Kill is ok, but looks a bit bland.

The next set of sigs is alright, not too keen, but nothing really dislikeable.

Really dont like urbantime sad.gif Seen so many pieces like it, and to me the execution isnt very good: textures arent crisp enough, the LiveTrace/Cutout doesnt look particularly good on the buildings and I really dislike the lens flares.

Sorry if that seemed a bit harsh, but I honestly cant think of anything positive on that piece.
Barak
Right on the money, Henry smile.gif That LP style is way overwhored. I just wanted to try my hand and work one, for execution purposes. That shit's harder than it looks tongue.gif

since I ain't got AI yet, vectorization's a bitch XD.gif that is indeed different uses of cutout.

And for some reason I'm drawn to using lens flare lately. they are so hot sometimes biggrin.gif

Thanks guys.
Battle Rifle
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Drerven
In the first collection I only like #4. I can hardly tell whats going on in the rest of them.
In dressed to kill the first one is really dark and the render doesn't go well with the background. Then the second one it looks really good on the right side but I think the render brings it down because it's not a smooth edge on the jacket.
In Space #2 is my fav.. I like the coloring and the background. It all blends well imo.
Urban Time is by far the best.

Hope you don't like my criticism and it helps... Keep up the good work! thumbsup.gif
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