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Phishiy
So.. Yeah,
This Is My First Pixel,
No Tutorials Were Used.

It's Currently <Finished>

This is what I have so far:
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Ill Update This Post Everytime I Update The Pixel

EDIT:

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Coloured the cape tar312.gif

EDIT2:

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Almost Done wink.gif

EDIT3:

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I Think I'll leave it like this for now.

Tell what you think it's missing and what you think I should impove on it wink.gif
Otter
Is his left arm broken?
Phishiy
QUOTE(Otter @ Sep 13 2009, 07:07 PM) *

Is his left arm broken?

Have A Guess?
Overdoziz
He's pointing that the arm looks weird.
Use capital i's instead of normal ones. smile.gif
Phishiy
QUOTE(Overdoziz @ Sep 13 2009, 07:42 PM) *

He's pointing that the arm looks weird.
Use capital i's instead of normal ones. smile.gif

I've Fixed both things, and thanks
Spire
I'd definatly work on anatomy, but for a first pixel this is very good.
Also, try to make the shading more detailed, because now it's pretty simple. Except for the fire, that's very well done.
Broli
Actually this needs a lot of work. I personally would not have dithered the fire, at least not that much. Dithering basically helps add texture while helping to blend colors as well.

You need to work on anatomy as well. Just from looking at this, his left arm seems as if it would be much longer than his right arm if it was straightened out.

The shading needs to be better. Don't pick colors that are so close together. Use colors that are not similar in color so you can have a better sense of contrast and depth.

That's just a little bit of my 2 cents. eep.gif
I am me and only me
Pixels are so 2006.
Phishiy
Thanks for the critisim (hope i spelled that right :s) guys.
overdoziziz
if i was you, i would have coloured the arm's aswell. i think that now, it looks like its unfinished =)
Otter
I like the dithering on the fire.

The arm still looks like it needs a cast and a Sharpie for all his friends.
Battle Rifle
fire looks badass
Row
the fire does look badass. nice one phishy.
Phishiy
O Thank Joo.

I'm trying to improve my Shading/Fire as we speak
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Leave a Comment tell me which one you prefer
overdoziziz
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