Beyblade
Sep 27 2009, 08:15 AM
Hi everybody,
Hi doctor nick
This is something I cooked up in my spare time
No, I didn't make the Audi, it's premade render, so ill post it here.
If I find the creators website, I'll be sure to add a link, if not, well, at least I posted the render.
C&C?
Rob
Sep 27 2009, 09:47 AM
What's the significance of the swirls being where they are? They're completely pointless. I think you'd have been better off putting swirly bits at the points of greatest air resistance to try and give the effect of the car moving sleekly along.
At the moment you've got a big car reflected on the floor and some swirly things which look like they're some Indian smoke signals about three miles behind it.
Oh also your sparkly floor reflections of the sparkly things don't work. The sparkly bits they're reflecting would need to be underneath the car. If they're not reflections then there's no reason why they've suddenly changed to a downwards focus rather than upwards.
Beyblade
Sep 27 2009, 12:15 PM
They're not reflections, they're the tail end of very long fractals.
Phishiy
Sep 27 2009, 12:22 PM
I LOVE IT!
h3n7y
Sep 27 2009, 02:48 PM
Rob is right, it has absolutely no meaning. It is a render slapped onto some fractals with a reflection at the bottom; so what? What does it signify, what does it represent? it is "art" for the sake of art (this being art in the loosest sense, might I add.)
kreotis
Sep 28 2009, 07:03 AM
I like the yellow and red gradients you added.
I need to download photoshop to post random shit that I do now. Dont yet have it on my current installation of windows.
Also: fractals never make anything look good. try some other methods
Saebjorn
Sep 28 2009, 12:06 PM
I agree with Rob and Henry, although the yellow fractal on the windscreen is nice. The leftmost fractal on the bonnet has a very definite line in it, which screws with the flowy-ness. The text could also use a bit of changing.
Cool piece overall.
kreotis
Sep 28 2009, 02:02 PM
QUOTE(Saebjorn @ Sep 28 2009, 05:06 AM)

leftmost fractal on the bonnet has a very definite line in it, which screws with the flowy-ness.
I beg your pardon sir but what the Phoronida
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